我和游泳 Me and Swimming

Now, I want to share one of my experiences with you. Yeah, it's something about one of my favorite sports——swimming. However, I have always afraid of swimming until I graduated from Senior High school. Now, I will tell you why I changed my ideas.
现在，我想与你分享我的一个经历。是关于我最喜欢的运动之一——游泳。然而，高中毕业之前我一直很害怕游泳。现在，我告诉你为什么我会改变我的想法。
When I was a child, I often went fishing with my father. Unluckily, an accident occurred to me one day. I fell into the river suddenly and I shouted to my father “Father, help! help!”（Of course, I hadn't learned swimming skills at that time.）Then my father jumped into the river and saved me from the river as quickly as he could. There was nothing with me but I have no desire to swim anymore. I just too scared to touch water in rivers or swimming pools. I certainly lost my courage. My parents wanted to teach me how to swim but I refused. When I graduated from Senior High school, I thought I should change something in my life. I was an adult and I should have courage to face all the things I used to be afraid. I should try to swim. I got over my frightening to learn swimming skills and I made it. Since then swimming becomes one of my favorite sports.
在我还是个孩子的时候，我经常跟爸爸去钓鱼。不幸的是，有一天，我发生了意外。我突然掉进河里之后对着我爸爸大喊“爸爸，救命！救命啊。”（当然，那个时候我还没学过游泳。）然后我父亲跳进河里尽可能快地救了我。虽然我没什么事，但我再也不想游泳了。我只是太害怕触摸河里或者游泳池的水了。我失去勇气。我父母想教我如何游泳，但我拒绝了。我高中毕业的时候，我觉得我应该做出一些改变。我已经是一个成年人，我应该要有勇气面对我曾经害怕的一切。我应该试着去游泳。我克服了恐惧去学习游泳，最后我成功了。从那时起，游泳就成了我最喜欢的运动之一。
I prefer swimming in swimming pools than rivers. The reason is simply. First, it's dangerous to swim in rivers because my swimming skills are poor. Second, swimming pools have the locker room where I can change my business clothes to my swimsuits. If it possible, I would like to go swimming with my friends. 
我喜欢在游泳池里游泳多过在河里。原因很简单。首先，因为我技术不好，在河里游泳很危险。第二，游泳池那里有更衣室，我可以换衣服。如果可能的话，我喜欢和朋友一起去游泳。